Eighth grade comic page 2

This is the second page of my Eighth Grade Comic, though it's the first real page.

This is where the "plot" begins to happen. Man, that demon guy sure can jump.

The names you see at the bottom are two people who read my comic back in the eighth grade and decided that that earned them a place in the credits. One of them also did some ridiculous editing where she thought the comic was too vulgar. Her first change was on page one. She changed the word 'mates' to 'lovers'. I honestly don't know what about the word mates she saw as vulgar, but I'm inexplicably unwilling to change it back.

By the way, this totally unrealistic blood splatter, more reminiscent of Mortal Kombat than real life, is why I decided to flag the entire comic as bloody and gorey. I'm new to this site, though, and I don't really have any frame of reference for what is actually bloody, so if I don't need to have it up, I'll take off the viewing restriction.